Does the Design of an Airoplane Affects How Far it Flies ?
Salem and the paper Plane
13 comments:
Anonymous
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Although you did a good job there some weak points like you have some problems in the Pronunciation of some words and your background pictures are distorted and the quality of the sound is bad .
the movie that you made is a nice one but sometimes the background is bad and when you speak the air that comes from your mouth affects the quality of the sound but well done Salem.
Good experiment but I think that you didn’t check your presentation before submitting it so you have a lot of mistakes I will not talk about them you should check your work again .
Your project is interesting.Although it is simple but it done in a good way.I also think that there are some weakneses in it.Chosing good backgrounds and clear font will make the project better.
You did a great job on your project. But there are some points make your project worse. First: the quality of your sound isn’t much good, try to use better microphone. Second you wrote material instead of materials. Third, some backgrounds have the same color of the font. Work on this to make it better.
Wonderful idea nice project but you need to fix some things, like: the sound is not clear, spelling mistake & you didn't complete some of the sentences.
13 comments:
Although you did a good job there some weak points like you have some problems in the Pronunciation of some words and your background pictures are distorted and the quality of the sound is bad .
Very good project, But some of the background are not clear
Suhail ALameri
Salem your project is good but you have to change all background and pictures.
Nice project thank for your hard job
He has a nice project but there is some week point. The background and sound is not clear. The font color is same background color.
the movie that you made is a nice one but sometimes the background is bad and when you speak the air that comes from your mouth affects the quality of the sound but well done Salem.
You’ve done a great job in your experiment and your video.
Good experiment but I think that you didn’t check your presentation before submitting it so you have a lot of mistakes I will not talk about them you should check your work again .
I like your idea but there are some mistakes like the backgrounds are distorted because you made it very big.
I am admired of the project that you made. It’s very interesting and simple. But you have to work in the presentation.
Nasser AL Azizi
Your project is interesting.Although it is simple but it done in a good way.I also think that there are some weakneses in it.Chosing good backgrounds and clear font will make the project better.
You did a great job on your project. But there are some points make your project worse.
First: the quality of your sound isn’t much good, try to use better microphone. Second you wrote material instead of materials. Third, some backgrounds have the same color of the font. Work on this to make it better.
Wonderful idea nice project but you need to fix some things, like: the sound is not clear, spelling mistake & you didn't complete some of the sentences.
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