You have a very nice project but you have some weak points like your sound in the recording made every body wonder was he sleeping when he did the recording?? And you have some problems in the Pronunciation of some words also were you so lazy to do a table on the power point!! . I hope you fix your problems
Thank for your hard job but you have to work on your sound because I think you want to sleep and you took picture of timetable you should do it in Excel.
Thank for your hard job but you have to work on your sound because I think you want to sleep and you took picture of timetable you should do it in Excel.
You have a good project and a good movie.I liked the idea of the experiment .Also the font ,the pictures and the desing are very good.On the other hand,you need to present the movie better,loud your voice and correct the spelling mistakes to make it better.
Thank you for the great job that you have done. But I have two small points. To make your project better. You used only 1 background in the video, if you make two or three it will be much better. Second you have to put the exact temperature in the result chart.
Your project is a nice project but you have some bad thing like the sound, the design but you have also beautiful background, clear picture and very good experiment.and well done omran
you have the reason tom go the best and you have the best idea because it is very important in our life, but you have weak point like: the voice is so low and you didn't value the columns.
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The idea of the project is very good but I have a question were you sleeping when you were recording??
You have a very nice project but you have some weak points like your sound in the recording made every body wonder was he sleeping when he did the recording?? And you have some problems in the Pronunciation of some words also were you so lazy to do a table on the power point!! . I hope you fix your problems
Great job Omran, It’s very nice project and presentation. But the sound is law.
Suhail Alameri
Omran your project is good but your voice was not clear.
Nice job but the sound was low
Good job omran you have worked hard but your voice in the presentation is ugly and you used a bad background for the budget you have to change it.
He is one of the best students in 10.01 Class. He did a nice project but there is one common. The sound was very weak he must fix it.
Mohammed your experiment is fantastic and you used beautiful backgrounds for your presentation well done.
Thank for your hard job but you have to work on your sound because I think you want to sleep and you took picture of timetable you should do it in Excel.
Thank for your hard job but you have to work on your sound because I think you want to sleep and you took picture of timetable you should do it in Excel.
Your experiment idea is scientific but your explanation is not clear because the sound quality must be higher.
you have a great project but you have to raise your voice and you should speak more comfort.
Nasser AL Azizi
You have a good project and a good movie.I liked the idea of the experiment .Also the font ,the pictures and the desing are very good.On the other hand,you need to present the movie better,loud your voice and correct the spelling mistakes to make it better.
Thank you for the great job that you have done. But I have two small points. To make your project better. You used only 1 background in the video, if you make two or three it will be much better.
Second you have to put the exact temperature in the result chart.
Your project is a nice project but you have some bad thing like the sound, the design but you have also beautiful background, clear picture and very good experiment.and well done omran
you have the reason tom go the best and you have the best idea because it is very important in our life, but you have weak point like: the voice is so low and you didn't value the columns.
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