the movie that you have made is good and the science method that you chose is better but you read from the slides. This is the only problem that you have and I’m sure that you will fix it.
It is a nice project.Your experiment is very interesting .You has also chosen good backgrounds and font .However,to make it better you should correct your spelling mistakes.
you do great job because you have good sound, clear pictures, good experiment but you have small mistake when you choose the background because it is not good.
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your project is excellent
You have made a very distinguished work however you have one grammatical mistake when you said materials is and you should have said materials are
Well done Nasser. Your project is very nice. And your design is good.
Suhail ALameri
Ahmed your project is good but you speak very fast and you use the same background.
Nice project thank for your hard job
I like your project and I think it’s nice. But you have some grammar mistakes.
the movie that you have made is good and the science method that you chose is better but you read from the slides. This is the only problem that you have and I’m sure that you will fix it.
Your project idea is brilliant and you’ve done it correctly and you’ve done a nice video but your pronunciation of the words is not good.
You have a good experiment but you are reading from the slides in the presentation and that is not good.
Your idea is nice but your backgrounds are all the same you can change background and the pictures are too small.
It is a nice project.Your experiment is very interesting .You has also chosen good backgrounds and font .However,to make it better you should correct your spelling mistakes.
you do great job because you have good sound, clear pictures, good experiment but you have small mistake when you choose the background because it is not good.
Your work is excellent, but I have some comments, like: you repeat some words twice & the sound little pit isn't clear.
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